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Xpress, the Coolest Section of the St. Petersburg Times, is the home for features, news and views of interest to young readers. Most of the work in Xpress, which appears on Mondays in Floridian, is produced by the Times' X-Team. The team of journalists ages 9-17 from around the Tampa Bay area is selected every year at the end of the school year to serve during the following school term. The current team of 12 was chosen out of 150 applicants. Watch for X-Team application forms in Xpress during the month of May.


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Celestial seasonings

We sought your ideas to help everyone remember the newly discovered Sedna, and boy did you come through. Your mnemonic sentences - filled with monkeys, martians, mango jelly and more - were out of this world!

By SHERRY ROBINSON
Published May 3, 2004

Sedna
[Times illustration: Teresanne Cossetta]

When Xpress asked kids to include Sedna in a mnemonic sentence to help learn and remember the names of the planets in the solar system, we expected to get a few responses.

More than 400 letters and e-mails arrived at the St. Petersburg Times. We got an entry from Canada, another from New Jersey.

Sedna is the recently discovered planetlike object 8-billion miles from Earth. The object is smaller than tiny Pluto, but it's still the biggest thing found circling the sun since Pluto was discovered in 1930. In the mnemonic sentence, the first letter of each word matches a planet: Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune, Pluto and now Sedna, if it is determined to be a new planet.

We realized two things from these wonderful entries: You all have incredibly vivid imaginations and you love to write silly sentences. And one thing is certain: You sure love monkeys. And martians and monsters. Vacuums, veterinarians and vegetarians also were popular. Those were just some of the colorful creatures and characters that were used in the sentences.

We asked for original sentences and you did not disappoint, although we did get a few that just added a word to the example sentence, "My very energetic mother just served us nine pizzas." And we also asked that only school kids enter but some moms, dads and grandparents couldn't resist. Ahh, to be young again.

The X-Team got into the act and helped to judge a few of the entries. And they even wrote a few. One of the best was this: Many vacationers enjoy meeting jellyfish swimming under noiseless perfect seas.

Now, without further ado, the winner of the Xpress Planetary Puzzler contest is Angela Chiacchia, 8, a third-grader at Bauder Elementary in Seminole. Her sentence:

Miss Velma Eggbert made jelly sandwiches using new plastic spoons.

Angela will receive a super cool Slip 'N Slide Splash Track by Wham-O. It's one of the many things we get here at the paper. We hope she enjoys it.

First runnerup is "Monkeys visit every Monday just so us nuts play silly," written by 13-year-old Samantha Jefferis, a seventh-grader at Williams Middle Magnet School in Tampa. She will receive 20Q from Radica, an electronic game that asks you 20 questions then guesses what is on your mind. Really, it works.

Second runnerup is "Mickey visits elegant Minnie just Saturdays until neighbors prepare supper," written by Michael Johnson, 10, a fourth-grader at Maniscalco Elementary in Lutz. He will receive a Dunk Seat water game from Wild Planet.

Third runnerup is "Many vipers eat mongoose jam sandwiches unless Nana packs salad," written by Clark Kelly, 7, a first-grader at Pasadena Fundamental Elementary in St. Petersburg. He will receive a MEGAS (Mecha Earth Guard Attack System) robot action figure from the Cartoon Network.

Honorable mention goes to "Miss Violet eats many juicy strawberries under Nina's porch swing," written by Alex Cario and Erin McCarragher, both 12 and in the sixth grade at Notre Dame Interparochial School in Spring Hill. They will receive two DVDs: Ghosts of the Abyss, which is about the Titanic, and Spy Kids 3-D. They can fight it out over who gets which movie.

And now for the best of the rest.

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Mr. Vick eats many juicy strawberries under nice pineapple stumps.

- Ryan Mueller, 10, fourth grade, St. Cecelia School, Clearwater

Monkeys visit every messy junk store unlike normal people should.

- Justin Miles, 13, seventh grade, St. Cecelia School, Clearwater

My voice eventually makes Jeremy scream until nanny prepares snacks.

- Diana Gaona, 10, fifth grade, Mittye P. Locke Elementary, Elfers

Memphis values Elvis' memories just so uncles never practice songs.

- Shawn Hannon, 11, fifth grade, Guardian Angels Catholic School, Clearwater

Many vegetarians eat more junk snacks unless ninety pounds show.

- Matthew Harvey, 10, fourth grade, Eisenhower Elementary, Clearwater

Mays' violets engender many joyous scenes using nature's pleasant smells.

- Anna Leo, 16, 10th grade, Clearwater High

Mary's very elegant mouse just sat under nine pretty sunflowers.

- Lynda Hodge's fourth-grade ESOL class, Lakewood Elementary, St. Petersburg

Many volcanic eruptions may just seem unusually new, partly strange.

- Alyssa Runnels, 10, St. Cecelia School, Clearwater

Moe Van Elder mowed just six utterly nasty pastures Sunday.

- Dylan Wolfinger, 11, sixth grade, Shorecrest Preparatory School, St. Petersburg

My valentine enters my jewelry store under no present supervised.

- Abbey Jensen, 6, first grade, Leila Davis Elementary, Clearwater

Martians voraciously eat marbles just so utter nonsense permanently survives.

- Katie Rogers, 11, fifth grade, homeschooled, Palm Harbor

Mom vacuums every morning just so unwanted neighbors pass soon.

- Alex Holtz, 10, fourth grade, St. Cecelia School, Clearwater

Music videos entertain many juveniles sitting upon nice puffy sofas.

- Jake Laursen, 9, third grade, Tarpon Springs Elementary School.

Mom's van easily moved just slightly uphill nearly past six.

- Mallory Hansen, 9, fourth grade, St. Cecelia School, Clearwater

Many voyages encounter mean jellyfish swimming under neon poisonous seaweed.

- Nicholas Brands, 12, sixth grade, Oxford Central School, Oxford, N.J.

Mom vacuums every Monday just so Uncle Nick plays soccer.

- Lynne Gulotta's third-grade class, ages 7 and 8, World of Knowledge, Holiday

Many vicious eels make juicy sandwiches under new plankton seas.

- Matt Jurski, 11, fifth grade, Guardian Angels Catholic School, Clearwater

My violin-eating monster jumped soundlessly upon nervous performing singers.

- Kimberley Nix, 11, sixth grade, Cyrus Eaton Elementary, Pugwash, Nova Scotia

Most vegetables except mushrooms just sprout under nice pure sunlight.

- Chelsea Peterson, 12, sixth grade, Transfiguration Catholic School, St. Petersburg

Mary Virginia's egregious mammoth justly sat upon nine pretty seals.

- Casey Grant, 13, eighth grade, St. Mary's Episcopal Day School, Tampa

My vet eats meat just sauteed until no pink shows!

- Alana J. Leo, 13, eighth grade, Largo Middle

Monkeys vacation every March just so unicorns never play saxophones!

- Kyle Davis, 9, third grade, Curtis Fundamental, Clearwater

Many volts electrified me just Sunday up north Pennsylvania Street.

- Erin Golden, 10, fourth grade, Westlake Christian School, Palm Harbor

Monsters vary every month just so unpleasant nights prove scary.

- Kelsey Halfast, 12, seventh grade, Grace Lutheran Church and School, St. Petersburg

Monkey ventriloquists entertain many Japanese sons until nine parrots sing.

- Emily Bozigar, 9, and Cassidy Guercio, 8, third-graders at Deer Park Elementary, New Port Richey

My vet Eddie Murphy just sent us new pet snacks.

- Lauren Graves, 13, seventh grade, St. Cecelia School, Clearwater

Most Vikings enjoy making jumbo sails under nearly perfect skies.

- Rachel Stoker, 12, seventh grade, Florida Virtual Academy, Palm Harbor

Mary Vine eats many juicy Skittles under Nana's perfect sofa.

- Katlin Wright and Lauren Tozour, both 11 and fifth-graders, Northside Christian School, St. Petersburg

Make very easy money - just send us nine purple sweaters.

- Gregory Gleason, 9, third grade, Holy Family Catholic School, St. Petersburg

My vigorous earthworms moved just slowly under newly planted seeds.

- Andrew Kullman, 9, third grade, Holy Family Catholic School, St. Petersburg

Many vicious eels move jumbo shoes under new purple shells.

- Alyssa Roberts and Amanda Muhsemann, both 12 and in seventh grade, Chasco Middle, Port Richey

My very exotic monkey just sat upon Nick's purple suitcase.

- Kayla Wagner, 12, seventh grade, Chasco Middle, Port Richey

Mr. Valentine enjoys mango jelly served until nine past seven.

- First- and second-graders at Wesley Chapel Elementary

Monkeys venture east making jeering, smashing, unfriendly noises past sunset.

- Jennifer Castle, 11, sixth grade, Coachman Fundamental Middle, Clearwater

My vicious elephant made jumbo-sized underpants near Pennsylvania State.

- Casondra Valle, 12, seventh grade, Coachman Fundamental Middle, Clearwater

Many vultures eat massive jumping sheep until nuns pleasantly sing.

- Thomas Halchak, 11, fifth grade, Curlew Creek Elementary, Palm Harbor

My very enormous mouth just sampled under ninety pies safely.

- Catherine Szempruch, 11, fifth grade, Cypress Woods Elementary, Palm Harbor

Many very excited martians jumped stars using new pogo sticks.

- Jennifer Davison, 12, sixth grade, West Hernando Middle, Brooksville

My volcano erupted many jumbo square umbrellas, nineteen parasols survived.

- Shalla Galanos, 8, third grade, Holy Family Catholic School, St. Petersburg

Many very excited martians join super unique NASA prep school.

- Michael Zampella, 10, fifth grade, Cotee River Elementary, New Port Richey

My vicious elephant made Joy sit under Noah's penguin stand.

- Grace McClelland, 10, fifth grade, Guardian Angels Catholic School, Clearwater

Many violinists entertain Madonna, J.Lo, Snoop (Dogg) under naturally peaceful skies.

- Musical fifth-grade students, Perkins Elementary, St. Petersburg

Mars' volcanoes erupted madly July sixth until numerous parties started.

- Tiffany Evonosky, 10, fourth grade, Maniscalco Elementary, Lutz

Monsters vanish every morning just so useless noisy people sleep.

- Rachel Keith, 9, fourth grade, Maniscalco Elementary, Lutz

Many Victorian entertaining monkeys jump slowly under numerous planets spinning.

- Brittany Anderson, 12, sixth grade, Largo Middle

Many vipers every month just slither up Nick's porch steps.

- Shelby Lenkey, 12, sixth grade, Gulf Middle, New Port Richey

Monica's very expensive Mustang just sank under Nathan's polluted swamp.

- Alexis Kimbrell, 12, sixth grade, Bayonet Point Middle, New Port Richey

Mike visits Ernie's mother's jewelry store until noon pricing silver.

- Joey Calkins, 11, sixth grade, Bayonet Point Middle, New Port Richey

[Last modified May 3, 2004, 12:17:08]

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